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Soldier at War

In a world,
Where black is white,
And white is black,
A fathers love is in a distant place.

A gun in hand,
Pointing toward some child's head,
Lost in thought,
His children back at home.

As time ticks by,
The gun drops down,
He hears a scream,
It sounds so close, yet so far.

It sounds of fear and of hate,
But, most of all the innocence leaving you,
He looks to see where it comes from,
Only to find it comes from inside,
He knows this child must die.

If not by his gun,
Then by the bomb strapped to it's waist,
He hears the ticking of the clock,
And raises the gun to pulling the trigger...

He sits up in bed,
Next to the woman he loves,
Forever being tortured by the memories...

  A soldier at war.


By: MandaLynn
©2004-2009 ~MandieLynn
:iconmandielynn:

Author's Comments

this is a poem i wrote for my dad. it's in also with a pic i submited a little wail ago. it has been published in a small area.

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:iconamong-the-dead:
it's so beautiful! i love this piece!
it's so...creative..and..just incredible
great imagery, and so true.
a sure :+fav:

:hug:
:iconmandielynn:
my dad is over seas, and he tells me a lot of how the people feel and i really get in to war movies and books to the point that it seems i was there.

--
Like a true nature's child
We were born, born to be wild
We can climb so high
I never wanna die
:iconspyderjade:
I agree. It's very beautiful. In one of those sad, painful sort of ways.
I'm reminded of a poster I saw once that said... crap, well, I can't remember exactly what it said, but it was something to the effect that "the reason people can sleep peacefully in their beds at night is because there are men willing to go out and fight wars for them." or something. You probably could put up the correct version and it would be significantly more poignant.
Hmm... and congrats on being published.

--
“The slave thinks he is released from bondage only to find a stronger set of chains.”
-Trent Reznor
:iconmandielynn:
bet i have that poster.

--
Like a true nature's child
We were born, born to be wild
We can climb so high
I never wanna die
:iconamong-the-dead:
well you write amazingly!!!
:iconmandielynn:
thank u. u do too.

--
Like a true nature's child
We were born, born to be wild
We can climb so high
I never wanna die
:iconspyderjade:
bet you do. bet it's in your basement.

--
“The slave thinks he is released from bondage only to find a stronger set of chains.”
-Trent Reznor
:iconmandielynn:
yep. cleaning that right now.

--
Like a true nature's child
We were born, born to be wild
We can climb so high
I never wanna die

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